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[yamaxanadu]

How am I doing? What do I need to work on? If there's something you wish to tell me, feel free to tell me here.

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[(Anonymous)]

This isn't really a critique on Shiki. I love your Shiki, actually! But I'm not going to lie, one thing's been bothering me for a while...

Comma splices. (http://depts.dyc.edu/learningcenter/owl/comma_splices.htm)

That would be all. orz I feel stupid for doing this... >>;

[yamaxanadu]

Don't feel stupid, I admit my grammar isn't always the best. I tend to abuse commas, and sometimes don't even notice how something is awkward until later. So I'll try harder.

Thank you for pointing it out, and thank you for liking how I play her.

[(Anonymous)]

After a little while of watching, I've noticed it's getting a lot better! Your posts are much easier and more enjoyable for this grammar freak to read now :3

Keep up the awesomeness that is Shiki~

[yamaxanadu]

I'm glad! I've been trying to keep mindful of that since it was pointed out. So hopefully I'll just improve on that.

Thank you. :3